Queen Elizabeth's Secret Agents - too many commas!

Started by prl, January 04, 2019, 02:25:18 PM

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Series synopsis:
QuoteQueen Elizabeth's Secret Agents

A look at the secret agents that protected Queen Elizabeth, from treason for over 40 years, through the execution of Mary Queen of Scots to the death of Queen Elizabeth, the capture of Catholic fugitive John Gerard, and the infamous Gunpowder Plot.

There really shouldn't be a comma between "Elizabeth" and "from". The phrase that follows the comma isn't part of the list that follows.
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Alison

Hi Prl,

I often remove excessive commas and correct a lot of very obvious mistakes by whoever writes the descriptions at SBS! This is now fixed, and I did leave the Oxford comma ;)

Thanks,
Alison.
IceTV Guide Team

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